Each
post for the A to Z Challenge is the challenge I set for myself.
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| It's Archery, but not as heated as the contest Hal is watching. |
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| L is for LOOK and LISTEN in every LOCATION |
HAL LONGLEAT AND THE TROUBLE WITH TRUTH
There was so much steam in the courtyard
Hal could almost convince himself he was dreaming. But the weather hadn’t
brought the fog, the castle was busier than a Fair Day, folk from roundabout wanted
to watch the spectacle, and all of them were breathing the place misty. And, it
was never easy to make out the target painted on a circular butt by the castle
wall.
Could YOU have been gifted with the ability to identify
and eliminate weak and brittle phrases from your work? To the uninitiated,
these interlopers look like quality imagery.
CLICHÉ RAIDERS: REWRITE!
• lap of
luxury
• last but
not least
• last
straw, it’s the
• late in
the day
• laugh up
your sleeve
• lavish
praise/hospitality/ceremony
• leave no
stone unturned
• let
bygones be bygones
• let’s
get this show on the road
• let sleeping
dogs lie
FOR L, I CHOSE LOOK and LISTEN. WHAT IS THE SUBJECT OF
YOUR L POST?
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